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Thirteen chairs
Black coats are worn
This is where Number XIV was born

Alone and silent
Things could be worse
Number XIII noticed her first

Salty yet sweet
First one she had
She realized they weren't all that bad

Warm summer sunsets
Three friends together
Xion knew it couldn't last forever

Not real at all
Look at his leer
XIV starts to realize her fear

Reprogrammed by I
Now on the clock tower
Xion uses all of XIII's power

A fall, defeat
Salt tears run
No more days underneath the sun

Roxas, not ready!
Fight Xemnas never.
Even though he'll forget forever

Dark storm clouds
Raindrop kisses
We all know who Xion misses
A very emotional moment for me, here. I came across the idea for this last night, and HAD to write it down. I modified it abit, but i'm not completely satisfied with the result. However, I love the last verse....paragraph thing.

This is my pathetic attempt to poetry. I can't can't CAN'T do it!! >O GAAAH. Well, i'd love to hear what you think. I'm really tired right now but...yeah..sorry if i'm not making sense.

I really tried to see things from her point of view, because I think her's is alittle deeper...not saying anything against Roxas. :3 i love that lil guy. -fansquee- :la:

Please, if you fave, tell me why. I'd like to hear it. Thanks for reading, and goodnight

This poem © Eoteflickr, please don't use as your own. I will KILL you, kay? :D
Xion, Roxas, everyone mentioned © Squeenix, Disney
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ShamanGirl1 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
this is good, but sad ):
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espeon40 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012  Student Digital Artist
*Sob* so sad, yet happy, but mostly sad. *sob* I loved that game I think it was the third game to make me cry, first being pokemon dungeon red, then pokemon dungeon darkness....
*sobs, sniff*
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AkuaSeaWolf Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2011
You just resummarized 358/2 days...
All the memories and emotional that I felt while playing just flooded back into me...
Thank you for this poem
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RabidRoxasFangirl Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011
is she talkin bout roxy?
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akizarulez Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
*cries*
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Death-By-Grunge Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2011
I'm crying...
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eoteflickr Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2011  Student Writer
D: Sorry to make you cry!
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Death-By-Grunge Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2011
No no,they're happy tears.
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sonnydey Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011   Writer
Dooope poetry foool!! oh yes. and the last verse is deep. everyone knows what raindrop kisses are even if though the cant quite put a finger on the sensation of having one touch your heart and cause your stomach to drop a few inches lower. This is good shtuff.
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eoteflickr Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011  Student Writer
:iconimhappyplz: th-thanks!
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